THE GOOD TIMES
By James Kelman

About halfway through James Kelman's new collection of short stories, The Good Times, I started thinking it would be fun to compare Kelman, a resident of Glasgow, with his fellow Scot Irvine Welsh (author of Trainspotting and most recently Filth). Reading their latest work back-to-back, I couldn't resist having a contest to see which author had used the word "fuck" the most on a single page. To my surprise, Kelman won. The grand prize goes to page 30, where you can find twenty of them.

Coarse language, however, only masks the essentially conservative sensibilities of both writers. Kelman (a winner of the Booker Prize in 1994) is a sentimental writer, especially when it comes to relationships, just as Welsh, for all his ravings on life in the gutter, is really an old-fashioned moralist.

In terms of style the two diverge sharply. Welsh's obscenity has a music to it, and his use of language goes back through Burgess to Joyce. Kelman, on the other hand, is more of a diamond in the working-class rough, and prefers to write in a kind of inarticulate stutter: "Right Colin, he said, right, I think I know, I think it was to do with eh like eh I mean how eh it's just because . . . it's that kind of thingwi, it's that, it's that that makes her the eh . . . that gives her the eh . . . ". Nobody will mistake this for the beautiful voice of fine writing.

Unlike most literary short story collections, The Good Times has no continuity in either character or location. Instead, the links tend to be thematic. The narrators, all male, are all haunted by what one of them calls "human absence." A boy investigating an abandoned building is deserted by his mates, a young man dreams of his estranged girlfriend's return, a husband and father drifts away from his family, a homeless man can't stop thinking of a woman who never showed up to meet him at a pub.

It is a fiction of withdrawal - into revery, delusion, and even paranoia. "Not necessarily depressed," one of the characters puts it, "But maybe just out of things."

In what may be an attempt to compound the anxiety there are no quotation marks or even dashes to indicate direct speech. Many times the line gets blurred between what is being said and what is being thought. In addition, so much of the presentation is done through dialogue and reflection that it is sometimes difficult to understand what is going on. The importance of dramatic action diminishes as the physical world begins to fade. A knocking at the door goes unanswered. Nobody lifts the phone when it rings.

This emphasis on alienation makes Kelman a hard author to finally respond to. I have to admit that I found The Good Life , like How Late It Was, How Late, frustrating and incomplete. It is as though Kelman has become one of his characters - trapped in a mental box while struggling to say something that never quite gets expressed. There are moments of light, but then the blinds are pulled and the door is closed.

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Review first published October 17, 1998.

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